I would like to hear what you think of the following song and should it need any improvement?
Title: One Step
Memories should not burden the heart too much.
Nor shall too many tears the past bring to the eyes.
The echoes of yesterday are fading from view,
And in their place, a new dawn breaks through.
One step, one day, eternity in sight.
Tomorrow's fears are being left behind.
Deeds well done for the day.
No regrets no remorse.
One step, one day, walking onwards.
If something is dear, if passion is burning
It shall not be buried but blown out in the sky.
A fire once lit, a truth once known,
The flame shall not die, nor the light fade away.
One step, one day, eternity in sight.
Tomorrow's fears are being left behind.
Deeds well done for the day.
No regrets no remorse.
One step, one day, walking onwards.
Sing of the joy, sorrow, happiness, and moments of despair.
Share the fear, bravery, disappointment but also of the love.
Sing of morning, of evening, and paint moon and stars.
Color before the eyes of the blue sky and brightly shining sun.
One step, one day, eternity in sight.
Tomorrow's fears are being left behind.
Deeds well done for the day.
No regrets no remorse.
One step, one day, walking onwards.
