FMeekins Posted May 27, 2005 Group: Members Followers: 1 Topic Count: 30 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 38 Content Per Day: 0.00 Reputation: 3 Days Won: 0 Joined: 10/29/2002 Status: Offline Share Posted May 27, 2005 He silently slipped into the back pew as those gathering for the day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
other one Posted May 27, 2005 Group: Worthy Ministers Followers: 29 Topic Count: 598 Topics Per Day: 0.08 Content Count: 56,181 Content Per Day: 7.56 Reputation: 27,907 Days Won: 271 Joined: 12/29/2003 Status: Offline Share Posted May 27, 2005 I like your style of writing...... Looks like the opening of a really good book Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qun Mang Posted May 27, 2005 Group: Diamond Member Followers: 1 Topic Count: 116 Topics Per Day: 0.02 Content Count: 678 Content Per Day: 0.09 Reputation: 15 Days Won: 0 Joined: 06/26/2004 Status: Offline Share Posted May 27, 2005 ...And those who saw Cecelia's sudden outburst told the other members and soon the whole town rejected her for the hypocrite she turned out to be. The Bible peddler, watching from the shadows of the town, saw the time was right, and silently left a cart of Bibles in the town square. The next day, one by one people started to notice and soon the cart emptied as everyone grabbed their own copy in wonder. The next day the empty cart was found replaced with a note that stated simply that whoever wanted to learn more of the wonderful book they picked up should come back to the square at 6PM that evening. Throughout the day people came to read the note, and by quarter of 6 the square was packed, children on the shoulders of the adults so they could get a better look. And precisely at 6PM a solitary figure stepped forward out of the crowd. Until now he had remained unnoticed as the townspeople gathered, excitedly discussing amongst themselves what they had been reading and what they might expect. As he stepped forward the crowd slowly grew quiet as the people started noticing the man in the middle of the square. And the revival began... --------------------------------- Well, my quick post is probably quite far from what Frederick has in store for us. I can only wait in anticipation for more- more story, or information on a book this is from. Don't leave us hanging! And please let me know if you would rather I remove this. I do not mean to step on your toes, just trying out some creativity of my own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qun Mang Posted May 27, 2005 Group: Diamond Member Followers: 1 Topic Count: 116 Topics Per Day: 0.02 Content Count: 678 Content Per Day: 0.09 Reputation: 15 Days Won: 0 Joined: 06/26/2004 Status: Offline Share Posted May 27, 2005 Whoops, just noticed part two in another message... I am off! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheya joie Posted May 28, 2005 Group: Diamond Member Followers: 7 Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 2,054 Content Per Day: 0.29 Reputation: 351 Days Won: 2 Joined: 03/15/2005 Status: Offline Share Posted May 28, 2005 Good writing! Do you the story somewhere else online? About to have a look at part 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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