poems that speak it all

[cutiepie1497]

Here's a few poems that I have recently come across that I have written awhile back. I think they speak for themselves, if not just tell me and I will tell you what going on.

A Hurting Girl

A girl who hurts constantly,

She is faced with many decisions,

Decisions she struggles with.

It

[Spunky]

Cutiepie1497,

Your title perfectly fit!

God Bless!

Edited May 21, 2006 by Spunky

[cutiepie1497]

thanks, i was hoping it would. I thought i lost those poems until I found them last night

[Ryan Dillard]

Nice poems you are a GREAT writer. You evidently know what you are talking about and do an incredible job of expressing it. Anyway keep up the excellent work!

[cutiepie1497]

thanks...I have 4 published.....I usually only write when I'm lonely, sad, depressed, etc. I am not one to express happy feelings lol it only makes me think of rainbows and butterflies, ick! lol gives me the creeps. but thanks, that means a lot to me. I have wrote a new poem in over a year....but I have all summer to write, that excited me! I do think I write pretty good, and I love reading! I read at 11th grade level in the 5th grade and well, now I read on the level of a sophmore in college...I guess my brain cant take much more! lol

[Giaour]

C,

What you write is so sad.

I felt as though I was there feeling your pain with you.

I hope that you still do not carry that pain and hurt around with you.

We writers put on paper what is in our hearts.

Emotions and personal experiences drive our need to create on paper.

I pray that you can write about joyful things someday.

It's not always rainbows and butterflies.

Joy can inspire some of the most beautiful and uplifting poetry.

Please consider tapping into the peace and happiness in your soul.

I would love to read it when you do.

[cutiepie1497]

I need prayers you guys, before bad turns to worse...

[Guest adabb43]

That was beatiful and said at the same time. But I can relate to it to some point. I at times throu life felt the same way as the person in your poem. And in a way I have closed myself from the world as much as I can. I keep telling myself I'm really to busy with work and in the past with raising my kids. But in fact I'm afraid of being hurt if I open myself to much with others. I did have a few close friends throu life but not many and with time I kind of lost contact with them. I guess in a way it was my fauilt. But remember there is one who will love you no matter what. Someone that you can always trust even throu you can't see this person and thats God. His the best kind of friend you can ever have. So trust in him. I to will pray for you.

[finding God (angel)]

those are great aand I love poetry and even writing it 2 thumbs up